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Spider-Man Thursday 23

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A quick one this week!
Too much to do at work those days, it's overtime everyday!
I hope you'd like my Vulture interpretation!!! I'd love to rework it anyway!!! Things here and there can be twisted and a background wouldn't hurt too!
Have fun and see you here very soon!!!
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Vultures face is great!!! Love the expression and anger! Nice Spidey as always man!!

Your spot blacks are tighter and your pencils feel more confident and strong. Your proportions have improved as well as your characterizations of the people through body language.It would be enhanced if Vulture's physique was a bit thinner and scrawnier to contrast his body type more from Spidey's. But since this is your visualization of the character and not mine, you've handled him well.

The execution of the wings looks like it was done with a tool and that works masterfully in translating the sharpness and mechanical nature of them. They contrast well with the more organic and natural feel of your pencils as used with the characters and their clothing. Nice way to make them(the wings) feel inorganic without having to render them to death. Very smart and experienced choice in your manner of execution.

I like how you've composed them against one another and created a connection by having Spidey holding onto his wing with his left hand. Very intimate and intense moment of the fight. Vulture feels frantic and like he's swinging wildly. While Spidey feels like he is confident and in control!

I never would have thought that you could get any better than you already are, but color me wrong! I've seen you grow so much since I've joined DA and started watching you. You are proof positive that great artists are 30% talent and 70% practice, practice, practice! (My own figure. You can vary the percentage as you like as long as "practice" has a higher percentage!) You get better and better all the time! Your hard work is paying off in spades. Excellent job my man!! You make me proud everytime you post!!!! Can't wait for more!